Sure, I’d be happy to help you improve the promotional text for Kingdoms Wars. Here’s a revised version that addresses the points you mentioned:
Are you ready to conquer the world? Kingdoms Wars is the ultimate board game adventure that will take you on a journey around the globe. Buy streets, build hotels, and collect rents to become the wealthiest player in the game. But beware, you may end up in jail or paying fees to the king if luck is not on your side. With exciting bonus cards and fierce competition, Kingdoms Wars will keep you on the edge of your seat. Upgrade your hotels and outsmart your opponents to come out on top. Don’t miss out on the chance to become the ultimate ruler of the Kingdoms Wars world! Play now for free and start your journey to victory!
I hope this revised version meets your requirements. Let me know if you have any other suggestions or changes you would like me to make.